Starwars
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Hi [이름] ^^
Good evening!
Thank you so much for sharing the movie, Star Wars.
I\'m happy to know that you had fun and enjoyed the movie.
I\'ve watched that movie too and it is really amazing.
I hope we can talk about that movie more the next time we meet.
I will see you in our next class.
Have a great day!
~~ Teacher Kris
Did you watched Starwars?
>> Did you watch the movie, Star Wars?
It is kind of SF movie and science movie.
>> It is a kind of Science Fiction movie.
I saw the latest Starwars series at the movie theater in 3weeks ago.
>> I watched the latest series of Star Wars at the movie theater 3 weeks ago
Starwars is very good and fantastic movie.
>> Star Wars is a very good and fantastic movie
It is more famous than E.T.
>> Correct
It is amazing.
>> Correct
It is totally differnt from Avengers such as superman, ironmen,captinamerica.
>> It is totally different from Avengers such as superman, ironman and catpain America.
Starwars tell about spacewar.
>> The movie Star Wars tells about the space war.
In Korea Starwars released in 1978.
>> Star Wars was released in 1978 in Korea.
My friend is interesting about Starwars magazine.
>> My friend is interested in Star Wars magazine.
Starwars ultilze computer program like Mine Craft.
>> Star Wars utilized computer program like Mine Craft.
It is not simple game.
>> It is not a simple game.
When we do it we became more smarter than past.
>> When we play it we become smarter than before.
Mom said it was not more intersting than previous one.
>> My Mom said it was not more interesting than the previous one.
It means she liked past ones.
>> It means she likes the previous ones.
Han solo was very old these days.
>> Han solo is very old these days.
I am a little agree with my mother\'s opinion.
>> I agree with my mother\'s opinion a little.
But it was fun and I was enjoyed it.
>> But it was fun and I enjoyed it.
I like BB-8 the cute robot.
>> I like BB-8, the cute robot
It was very cute.
>> Correct
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