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2. Please list any previous courses that you have taken that are in/or related to planning.
I\'m a transportation engineer specialized in demand forecasting, economic analysis and feasibility studies on railway construction at Korea National Railway (KR).
Transportation engineering consists of various academic studies in respect of engineering, economics and planning. I studied diverse subjects related to policy and decision making, which were needed fundamental theory and knowledge. Major lectures which I achieved could be listed below \"Transportation planning\", \"Transportation policy and law\", and \"Urban design & planning\" in university. Furthermore, I constantly followed relevant topics like \"Advanced transportation planning,\" \"Transport project evaluation\", and \"Econometrics\" in graduate school on transportation engineering.
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Please list any previous courses that you have taken that are in/or related to planning.
I\'m a transportation engineer specialized in demand forecasting, economic analysis and feasibility studies on railway construction at Korea National Railway (KR).
>> I\'m a transportation engineer that has specialized in demand forecasting, economic analysis, and feasibility studies on railway construction at Korea National Railway (KR).
Transportation engineering consists of various academic studies in respect of engineering, economics, and planning.
>> correct
I studied diverse subjects related to policy and decision making, which were needed fundamental theory and knowledge.
>> I studied diverse subjects related to policy and decision making, which need fundamental theory and knowledge.
Major lectures which I achieved could be listed below \"Transportation planning\", \"Transportation policy and law\", and \"Urban design & planning\" in university.
>> The major lectures which I took and finished in university are listed below: \"Transportation planning\", \"Transportation policy and law\", and \"Urban design & planning\".
Furthermore, I constantly followed relevant topics like \"Advanced transportation planning,\" \"Transport project evaluation\", and \"Econometrics\" in graduate school on transportation engineering.
>> Furthermore, I constantly followed relevant topics, such as \"Advanced transportation planning,\" \"Transport project evaluation\", and \"Econometrics\" in transportation engineering graduate school.
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