State of interest #3
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In particular, KR has been continuously providing practical educations for obtaining and maintaining PMP certificates for more than 14 years, and I have been trying to keep a continuous interest in these areas.
I have participated in international conferences and domestic conferences related to planning and academic forum. * Transportation Research Board (TRB, 2018, Washington), India Infrastructure Week(2018, Jakarta), and Global Infrastructure Cooperation Conference (GICC, 2018, Seoul). Therefore, it strived to make the latest technology trends and expertise current.
4. In a written statement, no more than 500 words, please respond to the following questions. 500 words
• How does your prior education (and experience) prepare you for a graduate work in planning?
• what are your career objectives? and how does this degree program relate to them?
• What research interests may you wish to pursue in your Master\'s Research Paper?
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Here\'s your 3rd edited composition, [이름]!
Cheers,
Jean~~
In particular, KR has been continuously providing practical educations for obtaining and maintaining PMP certificates for more than 14 years, and I have been trying to keep a continuous interest in these areas.
>> In particular, KR has been continuously providing practical educations to its engineers in obtaining and maintaining PMP certificates for more than 14 years, and I have been maintaining my interest in these areas. [It\'s best not to use the word \'try\'.]
>> or: In particular, KR has been continuously providing practical educations in PMP certificates for over 14 years, and I have been maintaining my interest in these areas.
I have participated in international conferences and domestic conferences related to planning and academic forum. * Transportation Research Board (TRB, 2018, Washington), India Infrastructure Week(2018, Jakarta), and Global Infrastructure Cooperation Conference (GICC, 2018, Seoul).
>> I have participated in international and domestic conferences related to planning and academic forums.
The following are some of the conferences I took part in: \"Transportation Research Board (TRB, 2018, Washington), \"India Infrastructure Week\" (2018, Jakarta), and \"Global Infrastructure Cooperation Conference \" (GICC, 2018, Seoul).
Therefore, it strived to make the latest technology trends and expertise current.
>> Therefore, my company has strived to make the latest technology trends and its expertise current.
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