Staying at home.

2019-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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The vacation passed for over 1week. And it makes me boring and boring. I planned so much to do on vacation. But I don\'t know whether I acheive it or not. I didn\'t go outside except having meals. I want to prepare for the next semester early. So, I am listening to online service.But I don\'t know I understood all. I think watching a lot of youtube video clips are too fun.

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The vacation passed for over 1week. And it makes me boring and boring.

>> One week had passed in our winter vacation and it makes me more bored.

I planned so much to do on vacation. But I don\'t know whether I acheive it or not.

>> I planned a lot of things to do on vacation but I don\'t know whether I can achieve it or not.

I didn\'t go outside except having meals. I want to prepare for the next semester early.

>> I I haven\'t been going outside except having meals. I want to prepare for the nest semester early.

So, I am listening to online service.But I don\'t know I understood all. I think watching a lot of youtube video clips are too fun.

>> So, I\'m listening to an online service however, I don\'t know if I\'m understanding it. I think watching YouTube video clips is more fun.

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