Staying at home can save lots of lives.
학생이 쓴 원문
These days, because of COVID-19 we can\'t go outside as before. If we go outside as before, then there will be lots of people that are infected by COVID-19. When we are infected by COVID-19, we will be sick. Lots of elder people die because of COVID-19. Like it, we have to be careful with the COVID-19 guidelines. It says we have to wear our own mask every time that we are outside. And, we have to refrain going outside. In conclusion, we can protect lots of people by refraining going outside. It is same with staying at home, so these days I recommend to stay at home.
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- Teacher Debbie
>> These days, because of COVID-19, we can\'t go outside as before.
If we go outside as before, then there will be lots of people that are infected by COVID-19.
>> If we go outside as before, then lots of people will be infected with COVID-19.
When we are infected by COVID-19, we will be sick.
>> When we are infected with COVID-19, we will be sick.
Lots of elder people die because of COVID-19.
>> Lots of elderly died because of COVID-19.
Like it, we have to be careful with the COVID-19 guidelines.
>> Therefore, we have to follow the COVID-19 guidelines.
It says we have to wear our own mask every time that we are outside.
>> The guidelines say we have to wear our own masks every time we are outside.
And, we have to refrain going outside.
>> We also have to refrain from going outside.
In conclusion, we can protect lots of people by refraining going outside.
>> In conclusion, we can protect lots of people by refraining from going out.
It is same with staying at home, so these days I recommend to stay at home.
>> That means we should stay at home, so I recommend everyone to stay at home these days.
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