Staying in Hanok
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently, I enjoyed \"Youn\'s stay\" which is variety show that foriegners stay in Hanok (traditional Korea style house) and Korea actors friendly serve with traditional Korea foods and amenities. I have never stayed in Hanok and thought to try to do it before because I thought Hanok would be uncomportable and too old. But, I changed my thought after I had watched this show. So in this summer, I want to spend my holiday in Hanok surrounded by mountains.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I heard about this show.
Is it really interesting?
Let\'s talk more about it in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Recently, I enjoyed \"Youn\'s stay\" which is variety show that foriegners stay in Hanok (traditional Korea style house) and Korea actors friendly serve with traditional Korea foods and amenities.
>> Recently, I enjoy \"Youn\'s stay\" which is a variety show where foreigners stay in Hanok (traditional Korean style house) and Korean actors serve with traditional Korean foods and amenities.
I have never stayed in Hanok and thought to try to do it before because I thought Hanok would be uncomportable and too old.
>> I have never stayed in Hanok and also never thought of trying to do it before because I thought Hanok would be uncomfortable and too old.
But, I changed my thought after I had watched this show.
>> But, I changed my mind after I had watched this show.
So in this summer, I want to spend my holiday in Hanok surrounded by mountains.
>> So this summer, I want to spend my holiday in Hanok surrounded by mountains.
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