staying in one place or moving in search of another place?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like staying in one place and most Korean hate staying in same place. You can notice very weird culture if you go out for dinner and drink an alcohol. Koreans usually eat up in few hours and move to other place for second round. Some people are proud of having many rounds when we are drinking. I don\'t think these culture represent my preference but it affect my traits a little bit.
Anyway, I am dreaming to live other countries that has a different cultures. I love having a talk with various people who use a different language. Actually, I am not good at making a friend in Korea but I like making a foreign friend. I am introvert in Korean society but I become a extrovert person, when I meet foreign friends. I know what I like is a new environment, people and so on.
강사 첨삭
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I don\'t like staying in one place and most Korean hate staying in same place.
>>> I don\'t like staying in one place and most Koreans hate staying in the same place.
You can notice very weird culture if you go out for dinner and drink an alcohol.
>>> You can notice very weird culture if you go out for dinner and drink alcohol.
Koreans usually eat up in few hours and move to other place for second round.
>>> Koreans usually eat up in few hours and move to another place for another round.
Some people are proud of having many rounds when we are drinking.
>>> Some people are proud of having many rounds when drinking.
I don\'t think these culture represent my preference but it affect my traits a little bit.
>>> I don\'t think these culture represents my preference but it affects my traits a little.
Anyway, I am dreaming to live other countries that has a different cultures.
Anyway, I am dreaming to live other countries that has a different cultures.
>>> Anyway, I am dreaming of living in another country that has different cultures.
I love having a talk with various people who use a different language.
>>> I love having a talk with various people who use different languages.
Actually, I am not good at making a friend in Korea but I like making a foreign friend.
>>> Actually, I am not good at making friends in Korea but I like making foreign friends.
I am introvert in Korean society but I become a extrovert person, when I meet foreign friends.
>>> I used to be an introvert person but I became an extrovert person when I meet foreign friends.
I know what I like is a new environment, people and so on.
>>> I know, I like a new environment, people and so on.
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