steak
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Hi Joey,
That's great! It sounds like you're going to have a really great weekend. Let me know what kind of steak you are going to have. Take care and talk to you later.
-RJ
I'm going eat steak now. Yepee!!
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It will be so delicious!!
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I'm going to go skiing with my dad, younger sister my dad's co worker
>>I'm going to go skiing with my dad, younger sister my dad's co-worker.
I will have so much fun!
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I want to go today
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Also, my korean class is 3 hours now. So I need to change the number.
>>Also, my Korean class is 3 hours now. So I need to change the number.
1st my home Changed. mom's phone
>>Instead of calling my home number, you have to call my mom's phone.
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