Stent Operation
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Dear [Name].
My father had heart surgery 2 years ago. At that time, my father received a stent service. The work uses a single steel line and spring. The doctor looks at the monitor, enters a steel line into the blood vessels of the body with the stent, and goes to the place where the heart is blocked. And then insert a Stent through the blockage. And expand the stent. That\'s why the blood passes through.
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My father had heart surgery 2 years ago.
>> My father had a heart surgery 2 years ago.
At that time, my father
received a stent service.
>> At that time, my father
received a stent procedure.
The work uses a single steel line and spring.
>> The procedure uses a catheter and a tube.
The doctor looks at the monitor, enters a steel line into the blood
vessels of the body with the stent, and goes to the place where the
heart is blocked.
>> The doctor looks at the monitor, enters a catheter into the blood
vessels of the body with the stent, and goes to the place where the
heart is blocked.
And then insert a Stent through the blockage. And
expand the stent. That\'s why the blood passes through
>> And then insert a stent through the blocked artery. The tube has a tiny ballon at the end of it. The doctor inflates the balloon inside the blocked artery.
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