stereotype
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, when teacher appointed a class monitor, female should always be the next to it, that means female should be an assistant or vice of it, through the whole my school life.
My mom really devoted to raise the four daughters remained by their passed mother though,
they could not fling off the stereotype of stepmother easily, so my mom’s activities were distorted by their jealousy eyes, so my mom should have had hard time.
Korean seemed to have a tendency to make a personality stereotype regard to what region they live in. Especially most Kyungsang Do people believe that the people in Jyulla Do smart but tricky, while themselves honest but blunt.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]!!!
Thank you so much for sharing this with me. I think mothers always dedicate themselves to their family. They make lots of sacrifices for their children. What you mentioned about being judged according to your region is unfair and that is one of the disadvantages of belonging to a stereotype. Anyways Ms. [Name], thank you again for this composition and I'll talk to you later during our class. See you!!
Lei :-)
Yes, when teacher appointed a class monitor, female should always be the next to it,
>>Yes, when my teacher appointed our class monitor, females should always be the next to it,
>>Yes, when the teacher appoints a class monitor, females should always be the next to it,
that means female should be an assistant or vice of it, through the whole my school life. >>it means that females should be assisting it for the whole school year
My mom really devoted to raise the four daughters remained by their passed mother though, >>My mom devoted herself to raise four daughters and remained that way until she passed away
they could not fling off the stereotype of their stepmother easily,
>>correct
so my mom’s activities were distorted by their jealousy eyes, so my mom should have had hard time. >>correct
Korean seemed to have a tendency to make a personality stereotype regard to what region they live in.
>>Koreans seemed to have a tendency to make a personality stereotype regarding to what region they live in.
Especially most Kyungsang Do people believe that the people in Jyulla Do are smart but tricky, while they think of themselves as honest but blunt.
>>correct
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