Stock Market

2022-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I invest to something, I will invest to stock market. I will invest to stock market because I think it is good way to invest.

강사 첨삭

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Investments are really good but it still depends if you know how it works or not. You need to be knowledgeable about it first.

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If I invest to something, I will invest to stock market.

>> If I invest to something, I will invest on stock market.

I will invest to stock market because I think it is good way to invest.

>> CORRECT

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