Stock markets have performed very badly during crisis. What difference, if any, do you think that ma

2020-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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As if most countries are struggling to contain the novel virus, stock markets in all over the worlds are struggling at the same time. Because a remarkable number of people are banned from going out including for work. So no worker, no business. In other words company cannot make money. That\'s why the stock rate plunged a lot. Some are saying it is now comparative to the great recession in 2008, Adding this could be worse. The stock has direct relation with the business\'s asset. So to speak if they cannot stand this dropping, they might have to expect the bankrupts. It means a lot of jobless. The nation\'s economy will shrink, so it will be inevitable for ordinary people to be affected. As i wrote people are being expected to lose their job. The have to debate their income to be vanished. Since money is considered as the most essential thing to support basic life of people, people would have had horrible time.

강사 첨삭

Hello Cho. Thank you for this. This is indeed a struggle everyone would deal with. It is a much bigger problem to face after all this pandemic ends.

- T. Beth
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As if most countries are struggling to contain the novel virus, stock markets in all over the worlds are struggling at the same time.

>>> As most countries are struggling to contain the novel virus, stock markets all over the world are struggling at the same time.

Because a remarkable number of people are banned from going out including for work.

>>> correct
So no worker, no business.

>>> correct

In other words company cannot make money.

>>> correct ( In other words, companies cannot make money. )

That\'s why the stock rate plunged a lot.

>>> correct

Some are saying it is now comparative to the great recession in 2008, Adding this could be worse.

>>> Some are saying it is now comparative to the great recession in 2008, adding this could be worse.

The stock has direct relation with the business\'s asset.

>>> correct

So to speak if they cannot stand this dropping, they might have to expect the bankrupts.

>>> So to speak, if they cannot stand this drop, they might have to expect bankruptcy.

It means a lot of jobless.

>>> It means, a lot of people could be jobless.

The nation\'s economy will shrink, so it will be inevitable for ordinary people to be affected.

>>> correct
As i wrote people are being expected to lose their job.

>>> As mentioned earlier, people are being expected to lose their job.

The have to debate their income to be vanished.

>>> OR: They have to expect their income to vanish.
Since money is considered as the most essential thing to support basic life of people, people would have had horrible time.

>>> Since money is considered as the most essential thing to support basic life of people, people would have horrible time.

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