Stocks:)
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If I had a lot of money, I would buy a lot of stocks. Because sometimes stock is so dangeorouse but it would be good if you sell them at the right timing.
And these day, my mother very interested at stocks.
And then naturally me too get the interest.
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Hi Ann:)
Actually, investing in stocks is a very good investment. For some people, this is a gamble because there is no assurance whether you are going to earn money from it.
If I had a lot of money, I would buy a lot of stocks.
>> CORRECT
Because sometimes stock is so dangeorouse but it would be good if you sell them at the right timing.
>> Although, sometimes buying stocks can be dangerous. It would be good if you sell them at the right timing.
>> Although, sometimes buying stocks can be dangerous. It would be good if you sell them at the right timing.
And these day, my mother very interested at stocks.
>> These days, my mother has been very interested in stocks.
And then naturally me too get the interest.
>> It naturally made me interested as well.
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