Stone is necessary ingredient.
학생이 쓴 원문
Stone is very important ingredient for construction, or lots of tools. People need construction for living and lots of purposes. Stone is used for ingredient to build something. I think stone is ingredient to make floor, iron, concrete so one of the most important thing for human living is stone. Stone is origin of lots of things.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daniel! Thank you for trying to answer your homework. However, please work more on sentence construction. Read more to expand more your English vocabulary .
-Teacher Debbie
>> A stone is a very important ingredient for construction and lots of tools.
People need construction for living and lots of purposes.
>> People need them for construction and lots of purposes.
Stone is used for ingredient to build something.
>> A stone is used as an ingredient to build something.
I think stone is ingredient to make floor, iron, concrete so one of the most important thing for human living is stone.
>> I think a stone is the ingredient to make floors, iron and concrete, so it is important for humans.
Stone is origin of lots of things.
>> The stone is origin of lots of things.
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