stop doing
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I don\'t agree that the government give right of choice their gender to people.
Human should realize that there exist in our life we can choose and we cannot choose.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
We share the same principle, and normalizing this kind of thinking can empower young people and encourage them to break away from pre-existing conceptions.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
I don\'t agree that the government give right of choice their gender to people.
>>> I don\'t agree that the government gives the right of choice their gender to people.
>>> \"I disagree with granting individuals the right to choose their gender by the government.
Human should realize that there exist in our life we can choose and we cannot choose.
>>> Humans need to recognize that in life, there are aspects we can choose and those we cannot
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