Stop smoking
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강사 첨삭
1. Smoking is bad for health.
>>Smoking is bad for the health.
2. Secondhand smoking also can damage our health.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Also, secondhand smoking can damage our health.
3. It may cause lung cancer and heart problems.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It damages our lungs and heart that may lead to cancer.
4. The reason why, on cigarette packs are warning labels.
>>The reason why, on cigarette packs there are warning labels.
5. If you smoke, you must stop smoking for your health.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If you are a person who smokes, you must stop it for your health.
6. I heard that it is not easy stop smoking.
>>I heard that it is not easy to stop smoking.
7. But it is the sooner the better.
>>But the sooner you stop the better.
Good sentences.
It\'s true. We can\'t really afford to get sick these days. Stay healthy, [이름].
- T. Melody^^
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