Stop smoking

2020-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Melody

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Smoking is bad for health. Secondhand smoking also can damage our health. It may cause lung cancer and heart problems. The reason why, on cigarette packs are warning labels. If you smoke, you must stop smoking for your health. I heard that it is not easy stop smoking. But it is the sooner the better.

강사 첨삭


1. Smoking is bad for health.

>>Smoking is bad for the health.


2. Secondhand smoking also can damage our health.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Also, secondhand smoking can damage our health.


3. It may cause lung cancer and heart problems.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It damages our lungs and heart that may lead to cancer.


4. The reason why, on cigarette packs are warning labels.

>>The reason why, on cigarette packs there are warning labels.


5. If you smoke, you must stop smoking for your health.

>>CORRECT

OR>>If you are a person who smokes, you must stop it for your health.


6. I heard that it is not easy stop smoking.

>>I heard that it is not easy to stop smoking.


7. But it is the sooner the better.

>>But the sooner you stop the better.


Good sentences.

It\'s true. We can\'t really afford to get sick these days. Stay healthy, [이름].


- T. Melody^^

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