Stop the War
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The war should be stop by recover mutual relationship between countries. High position of each country have to talk together and stop the war.
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Hi [이름]!
War is not good in any forms. Victims are the ones mostly affected, not the leaders. This is why they have to settle it in a well-mannered way.
The war should be stop by recover mutual relationship between countries.
>>The wars should be stop by recovering mutual relationship between countries.
High position of each country have to talk together and stop the war.
>> People with high positions, of each country, should talk together to stop the war.
>> People with high positions, of each country, should talk together to stop the war.
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