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I curious why so many young people oppose bill banning auto recording.
It is not common sense.
But I guess such as reactions are related to social distrust each other.
Maybe they think that it is more important protecting me from blackmailing than my privacy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
I guess I would agree with your answer. Most people today are really concerned about their protection and these days, it\'s hard to trust even the person who is very close to you. Let\'s talk about this later :)
Aki~
I curious why so many young people oppose bill banning auto recording.
>>> I am curious why so many young people oppose the bill banning auto recording.
It is not common sense.
>>> CORRECT!
But I guess such as reactions are related to social distrust each other.
>>> But I guess such reactions are related to social distrust of each other.
Maybe they think that it is more important protecting me from blackmailing than my privacy.
>>> CORRECT!
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