Strange dream I’ve had
학생이 쓴 원문
When i was in middle school i had bad dream. It was not only strange but also scary. So I’ll tell you about that dream. In my dream I was about to run on errands for my mom. Since I opened the door to go outside and there was a guy in front of my house just staring at me. I got scared so i tried to close the door.Suddenly he grabbed the door and didn’t let go. That was the end of the dream. I woke up , watched some funny videos on YouTube and went back to sleep. It is not extremely terrifying story but the reason why i still can’t forget it is that situation could happen in real life. I think because of that dream I can warn myself especially when I’m home alone!
강사 첨삭
Hi Rian! ~
Thank you so much for sharing the dream you had with me!
It must have felt so real!
I would have felt so scared as well.
And you are right, it could actually happen in real life.
I hope you share more in the future, and keep being open. ^^
See you in class! ~
I will be sending you corrections, if there are any, below. ^^
~t. Ally
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When I was in middle school I had bad dream.
>> CORRECT!
It was not only strange but also scary.
>> CORRECT!
So I’ll tell you about that dream.
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In my dream I was about to run on errands for my mom.
>> In my dream, I was about to run some errands for my mom.
Since I opened the door to go outside and there was a guy in front of my house just staring at me.
>> I opened the door to go outside, and there was a guy in front of my house, just staring at me.
I got scared so i tried to close the door.
>> CORRECT!
Suddenly he grabbed the door and didn’t let go.
>> CORRECT!
That was the end of the dream.
>> CORRECT!
I woke up , watched some funny videos on YouTube and went back to sleep.
>> CORRECT!
It is not extremely terrifying story but the reason why i still can’t forget it is that situation could happen in real life.
>> It is not an extremely terrifying story, but the reason why I still can’t forget it is that situation could happen in real life.
I think because of that dream I can warn myself especially when I’m home alone!
>> CORRECT!
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