Strange Food in My Country.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two kinds of food that foreigners think weird in Korea. They are sesame leaf pickle and canned silkworms (Beondegi). First, sesame leaf pickle looks like a real leaf, which taste like pickle with a sauce. We eat it as a side dish. Second, canned silkworms doesn\'t look delicious. It looks strange but tastes nutty. Many Koreans like to eat both of them for the meal.
강사 첨삭
1. There are two kinds of food that foreigners think weird in Korea.
>>CORRECT
OR>>There are two kinds of food that foreigners think strange in Korea.
2. They are sesame leaf pickle and canned silkworms (Beondegi).
>>They are pickled sesame leaves and canned silkworms (Beondegi).
3. First, sesame leaf pickle looks like a real leaf, which taste like pickle with a sauce.
>>First, pickled sesame leaves look like plain or fresh leaves, which taste like regular pickles with sauce.
4. We eat it as a side dish.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It is serve as a side dish.
5. Second, canned silkworms doesn\'t look delicious.
>>Second, canned silkworms don\'t look delicious.
6. It looks strange but tastes nutty.
>>CORRECT
OR>>It looks strange but has a nutty flavor.
7. Many Koreans like to eat both of them for the meal.
>>Many Koreans like to eat both of them for meal.
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