Strawberry

Strawberry has lots of vitamins so it is really good for your body. Strawberry is a fruit that comes out in winter season. At winter me and my sister eats strawberry. It is also sweet and delicious so my family likes it.Strawberry's colour is red and green and it has black dot. We only eat strawberry when it's red if we eat strawberry when it's green it is to bitter. Do you like to eat strawberry much?

Hi Min!^^ Happy Thursday!:)   I like strawberry as a fruit but not as a flavor. I love eating strawberry and cream. That is one of my favorite desserts. But I don\'t like strawberry flavored food like jam, biscuit, ice cream, and even juice.   Thank you for this composition. I\'ve made some modifications for you to review later on. See you in class!^_^/   ~T. Mayleen~   Strawberry has lots of vitamins so it is really good for your body. >> Strawberry has a lot of vitamins so it is really good for the body. Strawberry is a fruit that comes out in winter season. >> CORRECT OR: Strawberries come out in winter season. At winter me and my sister eats strawberry. >> In winter, my sister and I eat strawberries. It is also sweet and delicious so my family likes it. >> It is sweet and delicious so my family likes it. Strawberry\'s colour is red and green and it has black dot. >> Strawberry is color red and green and it has black dots or spots. We only eat strawberry when it\'s red if we eat strawberry when it\'s green it is to bitter. >> We only eat strawberry when it\'s ripe or color red. The green ones are bitter.Do you like to eat strawberry much? >> Do you also like to eat strawberry?