Strawvberry festival.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I went to go to restaurant. That place was spick-and-span. There place is having a strawberry festival. So, I ate many toothsome dessert. And there were special dishes using strawberries.
강사 첨삭
Wow! This is wonderful, Emily! You were able to make a paragraph using the expressions coherently. I wish I were there in that restaurant so I could enjoy their strawberry recipes. I love it! See you!-Faith-
Today, I went to go to restaurant. >> Today, I went to a restaurant.
That place was spick-and-span.
>> That place was a spick-and-span.
There place is having a strawberry festival.
>> CORRECT
OR Surprisingly, they held a strawberry festival.
So, I ate many toothsome dessert.
>> So, I ate many toothsome desserts.
And there were special dishes using strawberries.
>> CORRECT
OR And there were special dishes with strawberries.
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