stress
학생이 쓴 원문
The best way of reduce stress find a hobby by my self.
Through a bobby, I reduce a stress during a day and spend a fresh day.
If We don\'t reduce a stress, That will stock in mind and at some time break our mind.
In anyway very important that we have to find solution about stress.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ethan!
Don\'t give in to stress.
Keep fighting and find a balance in your life.
Everybody deserves peace and happiness.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The best way of reduce stress find a hobby by my self.
>> The best way to reduce stress is to find a hobby for myself.
Through a bobby, I reduce a stress during a day and spend a fresh day.
Through a bobby, I reduce a stress during a day and spend a fresh day.
>> By having a hobby, I can reduce stress during the day and feel refreshed.
If We don\'t reduce a stress, That will stock in mind and at some time break our mind.
If We don\'t reduce a stress, That will stock in mind and at some time break our mind.
>> If we don\'t reduce stress, our minds cold get stuck and it would be very bad for our mental health.
In anyway very important that we have to find solution about stress.
In anyway very important that we have to find solution about stress.
>> By any means, it is very important that we find a solution to our stress problem.
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