Stress
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I think proper stress needs in our life. Proper stress gives me force to do something harder. Many people avoid getting stress, but I think that is not a good idea. People should know how to control their mind. That is the most important thing in our life. Of course, I have to practice it more. :D
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I think proper stress needs in our life.
>> I believe that good stress is necessary in our lives.
Proper stress gives me force to do something harder.
>> The right amount of stress motivates me to work harder.
Many people avoid getting stress, but I think that is not a good idea.
>> Many people try to stay away from stress, but I don\'t believe that is a good idea.
>> Many people try to stay away from stress, but I don\'t believe that is a good idea.
People should know how to control their mind.
>>Correct!
That is the most important thing in our life. Of course, I have to practice it more. :D
>> Correct!
>> OR: That is the most significant thing in our lives. Of course, I need to practice it more.
>> OR: That is the most significant thing in our lives. Of course, I need to practice it more.
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