Stress is a necessary factor for us to do something.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am driven by stress of poverty these days.
It\'s just kidding.
How do you manage your stress?
I am doing exercise regularly and eat well and sleep well.
Stress can lower your blood pressure.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! It\'s nice to read your composition everyday because you have great insights. Keep it up! To answer your question about stress management, I manage my stress by talking to my students everyday and do chores on weekends. ^_^
I am driven by stress of poverty these days.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>Poverty gives me stress these days.
I am doing exercise regularly and eat well and sleep well.
>>>I exercise regularly, eat and sleep well.
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