Stress is required in our lives

Happy Wednesday, [이름]! Thanks for your insights. Like most things, I agree that stress also has its own pros and cons. Here are a few corrections for better sentences.

Anyway, have a blast! See you when you\'re free. ^_^

~T.Avery

I think a little stress is good and useful.

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If there aren’t stress in our lives. We couldn’t recognize how happy it is.

>> If there aren’t stress in our lives, we couldn’t recognize how happy it is.

To release stress, we are trying to listen music, relax, hang out.

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For example, when you had tough time today, after coming back home, you are going to release your stress in your home.

>> For example, when you had a tough time today, after coming back home, you are going to release your stress in your home.

You could shower and at that time, you could feel relaxing and releasing your fatigue.

>> You could shower and during that time, you could feel your body relaxing and releasing your fatigue.

That could goes to happy.

>> That could lead to feeling happy.

Or you could drink a glass of beer at night with light-bites.

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Like the sentence with there aren’t no bright if there aren’t darkness.

>> Like they say, there will be no brightness without any darkness.

Also, too much stress could ruin our lives.

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although too much stress is harmful to everybody’s life. But that doesn’t mean that that is bad.

>> Although too much stress is harmful to everybody’s life, that doesn’t mean that it is bad.

Proper stress is necessary to our life.

>> Proper stress is necessary in our lives.

Also there is study about proper English is helpful to our brain.

>>Also, a study shows that proper stress is helpful to our brain.