stressful moment
학생이 쓴 원문
I was stressed when children were sicked.
Their fever didn`t go down so they had to run testes a lot
It`s was hard to watch the process.
There was nothing I could do.
I `ve been through this many times I realized that people are very weak.
There were times when I was stressed out but after that It`s was the hardest time when my children were sick.
I can1t live without stress but I don`t want to remember it again
Now I have a lot of immunity to stress,
Let`s enjoy the stress.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]! Happy Monday! Thank you for doing your homework. It much appreciated. You did well. See you later in class.
Here are your corrections:
>> I got stressed when my children got sick.
>> Their fever wasn\'t going down so they had to run a lot of tests.
>> It was hard to watch the process.
>> CORRECT
>> I\'ve been through this many times so I realized that people are very weak.
>> There were times when I was stressed out but the hardest one was when my children got sick.
I can1t live without stress but I don`t want to remember it again
>> CORRECT; can\'t
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
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