strike in my university

Nowadays, there is a strike in my university. The people who is cleaning the campus stop their works. They claim that the have to get more payments. I know that their wages are too small to make their living. They coudln't negotiated with their company for a long time, so they want for university authority to take a chare of it. Although this claim has no legal basis, many students agree with them. I also think that it is resonable. The campus especially the restroom become more and more disgusting, however, I hope that they should get proper wages through this strike.

Hello [이름]!             Wow! That is a big problem. Well, I think that they have the right to complain also in the school because the Company who recruited them is the ones offering the University on the wages for the people. So they cannot raise their wage if the University won’t be able to help them. I think it is also right that they get what they deserve to be able to serve the University properly. I hope that this will all be resolved in no time. T.Faye   Here are some corrections: Nowadays, there is a strike in my university. >>Correct!The people who is cleaning the campus stop their works. >>The people cleaning the campus stopped working.They claim that the have to get more payments. >>They are complaining about getting a higher pay.I know that their wages are too small to make their living. >>I know that their wages are too small to make a living.They coudln't negotiated with their company for a long time, so they want for university authority to take a chare of it. >>They had a difficult time negotiating with their Company, so they want our University’s authority to take charge of it.Although this claim has no legal basis, many students agree with them. >>Correct!I also think that it is resonable. >>I also think that it is reasonable.The campus especially the restroom become more and more disgusting, however, I hope that they should get proper wages through this strike. >>Correct!