Strong Point, Weak Point

Strong Point My strong point is my smile. My smile makes people pleasant and convenient. In KIA Motors, My smile also influenced many workers. Using smile, My work place will be nice. Weak Point My weak point is accepting all ask. For this weak point, my time is insufficient. Therefore, I cut down my sleep. And, I improve my personal relations in factory. Please correct my sentence

Hey there Han Su Thanks for asking me checking your sentences. Try to be more careful next time. Enjoy the rest of the day. Take care. T. Rowena Strong Point >> My strengthsMy strong point is my smile. >> One of my strengths is my smile. My smile makes people pleasant and convenient. >> My smile makes people feel pleasant and convenient. In KIA Motors, My smile also influenced many workers. >> In KIA Motors, my smile can influence many workers. Using smile, My work place will be nice.>>With this, my work place will be nice. Weak point >> My weaknesses My weak point is accepting all ask. >> One of my weaknesses is accepting all requests. For this weak point, my time is insufficient. >> Correct! Therefore, I cut down my sleep. >> correct! And, I improve my personal relations in factory.>> And, I have to improve my personal relations in the factory.Please correct my sentence. >> Please correct my sentences.