Studying English

2010-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I have been studying English for over 10 years. But I am not good at it. When I studied it in highschool , I didn't have any purpose but passing the exam. Since few years ago , I have got reason to study English. First , for getting a promotion. If I have a some grade in English test , I will get an additional point in my carrer. Secondly, I want to meet foreign friend and go to other countries without any difficulties. That's why I study English. When I read a English newspapaper loudly ,it feels really good. But sometimes I hate myself when I got a bad result in an English exam

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What can I say, you are such a very good student..And I commend you for a job well done! I cant say much my dear [이름], because youre confident, and I really like the way you are that even though youre very busy working in your company you still manage to have this class. ANyway, Ill take to you again later my dear.. See you... T.Cam   I have been studying English for over 10 years. >>correct!But Im not good at it. >>correct!When I studied it in highschool , I didn't have any purpose but passing the exam. >>correct!Since few years ago , I have got reason to study English. >>correct! >>A few years ago, Ive got reason to study English. First , for getting a promotion.>>correct!If I have a some grade in English test ,I will get an additional point in my carrer.>>correct!Secondly, I want to meet foreign friend and go to other countries without any difficulties.>>correct!That's why I study English. >>Thats why I studied English.When I read a English newspapaper loudly ,it feels really good. >>When I read an English newspaper ludly, it feels really good!But sometimes I hate myself when I got a bad result in an English exam. >>correct!  

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