Studying English in the office.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am a office worker,and I am in charge of Marketing.
Eglish is very usfule for me to search data related in my job on the foreign internet web site.
That's one of the reasons I am studying English everyday.
However the situation I have is not easy to concentrate on studying English everyday. I am married and 8 month pregnent.
There is not enough time for studying.
I have planed to wake up one hour early in the morning, and go to the office. I can study about 1 hour in the office.
I am not irritated this time.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]. Thanks for your letter. Here are some revisions.
I am a office worker,and I am in charge of Marketing.
>>I am an office worker and I am in charge of marketing.Eglish is very usfule for me to search data related in my job on the foreign internet web site.
>>English is very useful for me to search datas related to my job in foreign websites That's one of the reasons I am studying English everyday.
>>That's the reason why I study English everyday.However the situation I have is not easy to concentrate on studying English everyday.
>>However, my present situation is giving me a hard time to concentrate on my studies
I am married and 8 month pregnent.
>>I am married and 8 months pregnant There is not enough time for studying.
>> There is no enough time to studyI have planed to wake up one hour early in the morning, and go to the office.
>>I plan to wake up an hour early in the morning and go to the office,
I can study about 1 hour in the office.
>>I can study about an hour in my officeI am not irritated this time.
>>I won't feel irritated at this time.
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