Studying While Listening to Music
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I like studying while listening to music. Especially, when I was high school student, I studied with music every day. I think it makes me concentrate better. Also, when I was sleepy while studying, music helps me wake up and concentrate to study. So, I like listening to exciting music. But, one day I saw a news about side effects of studying with listening to music. The news told me it makes studying inefficient. Furthermore, it makes me out of focus when I was in test. It was shocking to me. I tried to study without songs, but it was hard to me. So, I\'m fixing it little by little by listening to quiet songs like a classic music, a bgm, a piano music, etc.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kate!
I really like the expressions you used.
They are commonly used in the language.
I\'m glad you\'re familiar with them
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like studying while listening to music.
>> Correct
Especially, when I was high school student, I studied with music every day.
>> This is especially true when I was a high school student and I studied with music every day.
I think it makes me concentrate better.
>> Correct
Also, when I was sleepy while studying, music helps me wake up and concentrate to study.
>> Also, when I was sleepy while studying, music helps me wake up and concentrate on studying.
So, I like listening to exciting music.
>> Correct
But, one day I saw a news about side effects of studying with listening to music.
>> However, one day, I read an article about the side effects of studying while listening to music.
The news told me it makes studying inefficient.
>> The article said that music makes students inefficient in studying.
Furthermore, it makes me out of focus when I was in test.
>> Furthermore, it makes me lose my focus when I\'m taking a test.
It was shocking to me.
>> It was shocking for me.
I tried to study without songs, but it was hard to me.
>> I tried to study without listening to songs, but it was hard for me.
So, I\'m fixing it little by little by listening to quiet songs like a classic music, a bgm, a piano music, etc.
>> So, I\'m fixing it little by little by listening to mellow songs like classical music.
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