Stupid
학생이 쓴 원문
I can\'t understand why so many people try to make bills that controls and restricts of human social roles.
We need natural order in human society not law and force.
Natural order comes from cooperation, understanding and coordination.
They seem don\'t know that simple truth.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
You have a humorous reaction in this article. Well I think some politicians create this kind of bill to show that \"at a very least\" they are working.
Thank you for showing interest in this topic!
Enjoy the day.
Aki~
I can\'t understand why so many people try to make bills that controls and restricts of human social roles.
>>> I can\'t understand why so many people try to make bills that control and restricts human social roles.
We need natural order in human society, not law and force.
>>> CORRECT!
Natural order comes from cooperation, understanding, and coordination.
>>> CORRECT!
They seem don\'t know that simple truth.
>>> CORRECT!
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