Stupid Korean
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want to buy luxury items even bags and cars.
Expensive luxury goods have no meaning to me.
L love my echo- bags that is very cheap but very convenient.for my essential item.
Koreans inflate the vanity each other.
I try to warn them \" Don\'t balame for social trend and others\".
Your behaviors and choices eventually will shape social culture in Korea.
So, it\'s your fault and your responsiibility.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
Here are your few corrections on your composition
Here are your few corrections on your composition
I agree that in everything that we do, we must not blame anyone for its consequence.
we are responsible with our own action.
Have a great day!
Aki~
I don\'t want to buy luxury items even bags and cars.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>> I don\'t really prefer buying luxury items like bags and cars.
Expensive luxury goods have no meaning to me.
>>> Expensive luxury goods do not have meaning to me.
L love my echo- bags that is very cheap but very convenient.for my essential item.
>>> I love my cheap eco bags which are very cheap but convenient for my essential items.
Koreans inflate the vanity each other.
>>> Koreans inflate the vanity of each other.
>>> Koreans degrade the value of each item.
I try to warn them \" Don\'t balame for social trend and others\".
>>> I try to warm them not to blame the social trend and other people.
Your behaviors and choices eventually will shape social culture in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Their behaviors and choices eventually will shape social culture in Korea.
So, it\'s your fault and your responsibility.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>>So, it\'s their fault and responsibility.
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