Sty

2010-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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She hoped that she would earn a lot of margin money from the investment But even a purchaser didn’t appear yet and she couldn’t keep paying no more. Another friend tipped me off about this story and was anxious about that she got in a bankruptcy. I got a sty inside the lower eyelid on the right and before this, had gotten another one inside the lower eyelid on the left. I kept putting on eye ointment by myself because I didn’t want to go see an ophthalmologist. Now, the left one is ok but right one is still aching. This is the first time for me to get sties inside of my eyelids. We decided to go see the doctor today, but we didn’t know that it’s Thursday when he takes his weekly leave. So we have to postpone visiting the doctor who is our favorite.

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Hi Ms. [Name]!!! I hope that your sties will be gone by tomorrow. I haven't experienced having a sty before so I don't know how to handle it. But anyways, get well and stay beautiful. Have a great day!!! Lei J   She hoped that she would earn a lot of margin money from the investment >>correct But even a purchaser didn’t appear yet and she couldn’t keep paying no more. >>But even a single purchaser didn’t appear yet and she could keep paying no more. Another friend tipped me off about this story and was anxious about that she got in a bankruptcy.>>correct I got a sty inside the lower eyelid on the right and before this, had gotten another one inside the lower eyelid on the left. >>correct I kept applying eye ointment by myself because I didn’t want to go see an ophthalmologist. >>correct Now, the left one is ok but the right one is still aching. >>correct This is the first time for me to get sties inside my eyelids. >>correct We decided to go see the doctor today, but we didn’t know that it’s Thursday when he takes his weekly leave. >>correct So we have to postpone visiting the doctor who is our favorite. >>correct >>So we have to postpone visiting our favorite doctor (>>better)  

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