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2012-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

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Expecting a baby is holy and fantastic. But I don't wanna deliver my baby because I heard lots of things about expecting a baby to my friends. It is terribly painful and having a sense of responsibility. I still wanna enjoy my life. I have mixed emotions because I am getting age. I am already in my early 30s. Thesedays As women work hard than the past few years the average age of women giving their first childbirth is rising. But I heard that giving their first childbirth is good as quickly as possible. So I am worried about that. Homework 1. Either answer (is, ) acceptable. 2. Every one of those books (is, ) fiction. 3. Nobody (, knows) the trouble I've seen. 4. (Is, ) the news on at five or six. 5. Mathematics (is, ) John's favorite subject, while Civics (is, ) Andrea's favorite subject.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Miss [이름], 

                   Good afternoon! Thank you so much for doing your homework:)

I understand how you feel Miss [이름]. I am not a mother yet but I\'ve heard from my mom and from my friends how it feels when giving birth. Let\'s discuss this in our class tomorrow:)! Take care!

Expecting a baby is holy and fantastic.

>>Correct
But I don\'t wanna deliver my baby because I heard lots of things about expecting a baby from my friends.
>>Correct
It is terribly painful and having a sense of responsibility.

>>It is terribly painful and it needs a lot of sense of responsibility.
I still wanna enjoy my life.

>>Correct
I have mixed emotions because I am getting age.

>>I have mixed emotions because i\'m getting older.
I am already in my early 30s.

>>Correct
Thesedays As women work hard than the past few years the average age of women giving their first childbirth is rising.
>>These days, as women work harder than in the past the average women giving birth to thier first baby is rising.
But I heard that giving their first childbirth is good as quickly as possible.
>>Correct
So I am worried about that.
>>Correct
Homework
>>Correct
1. Either answer (is, ) acceptable.
>>Correct
2. Every one of those books (is, ) fiction.
>>Correct
3. Nobody (, knows) the trouble I\'ve seen.
>>Correct
4. (Is, ) the news on at five or six.
>>Correct
5. Mathematics (is, ) John\'s favorite subject, while Civics (is, ) Andrea\'s favorite subject.

>>Correct

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