subsidy
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that excessivw subsidiy system can make laze and idle.
There is no tention and it makes self -effort.
Specially young generations become opportunistic.
강사 첨삭
Good day Ms. [이름]!
There is an old Chinese proverb that I love, \"give a man a fish you feed him for a day. Teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime\"
Thank yu for expressing your thought this way.
take care!
Aki~
I think that excessivw subsidiy system can make laze and idle.
>>> I think that an excessive subsidy system can make a person lazy and idle.
There is no tention and it makes self -effort.
>>> There is no tension and it makes less self-effort.
Specially young generations become opportunistic.
>> Especially that young generations become opportunists.
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