success
학생이 쓴 원문
What pressure do you have in life?
>>> What pressure I have in life is success. I have not supported my family\'s finantial budget. It was okay because I was young. Although My age reaches the level of social worker, as you know, I choose the graduate shool for forward six years. Because the pay of graduate school will be low, I continuously will not support that. So I have to succeed success to support! Although I represent this feeling as pressure but honestly I don\'t feel pressured because I\'m sure that If I get doctor degree, I can get nice work and nice pay!
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!~
Your hard work and perseverance will surely pay off! I wish you success in life :)
Chammy
What pressure I have in life is success.
OR
>> My life\'s pressure is about success.
I have not supported my family\'s finantial budget.
>> I don\'t support my family financially.
OR
>> I don\'t contribute to my family\'s finances,
It was okay because I was young.
>> It is okay because I am still young.
Although My age reaches the level of social worker, as you know, I choose the graduate shool for forward six years.
>>Although my age qualifies me for the position of social worker, as you know, I have decided to pursue a graduate degree for the next six years.
Because the pay of graduate school will be low, I continuously will not support that.
>> Because the pay for the graduate school is high, I cant continuously support that.
So I have to succeed success to support!
>> So I have to succeed to be capable of supporting them!
Although I represent this feeling as pressure but honestly I don\'t feel pressured because I\'m sure that If I get doctor degree, I can get nice work and nice pay!
>> Although I represent this feeling as pressure, honestly, I don\'t feel pressured because I\'m sure that If I get a doctorate degree, I can get nice work and nice pay!
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