success
학생이 쓴 원문
If you knew success was guaranteed but required ten years of waiting, would you accept the offer?
I would accept the offer because I am just 14years old and when 10 years later, I am still 24 and that’s still young age. Not many people experience success in their twenties. So I will live comfortably from then. So for me this offer is very good condition and it‘s really great for my future.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this, [이름]. I agree with you. I think most people would accept this request, as long as they can still live 10 years later to enjoy it. Have a good day!
I would accept the offer because I am just 14years old and when 10 years later, I am still 24 and that’s still young age.
>>> I would accept the offer because I\'m only 14 years old. Even after waiting 10 years, I would still be just 24, which is still very young.
Not many people experience success in their twenties.
>>> correct
So I will live comfortably from then.
>>> correct
>>> OR: So I would be in a very fortunate position.
So for me this offer is very good condition and it‘s really great for my future.
>>> For me, this is an excellent offer because it would provide a secure and promising future.
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