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Success! Everyone want to success in their life and it might get wealth or honor. I watched a documentary about who can be a success and what is the speical feature of a success. There are some tests for analysis. Analysts observed many ways such as morality, sociality, convergence and apriority. At that time that is very stange why is the morality important? But now I have been known the morality is very important for success. I thought about how was my life and have I honestly lived? If there are many people around me , I will act the moral. Opposite condition, conversely, I wasted some trashs because I didn't do conscious the people. Thoese trivial actions can change me and influence of my life. I really want to be a more moral person and it is good for me.

Hello there Sir [이름]! Long time no see in this site of Power English. It was great reading from you again. Regarding your essay, actually I believe that if your ways are moral, everything in the way you act, say, and deal with every aspect of your life will be pleasant and with that, you are already successful. For me, being happy is being successful because if you are succesful, you are always happy. It is just vice versa. Then, see you on your next essay Sir [이름]! Job well done!   Success! >>Correct!Everyone want to success in their life and it might get wealth or honor. >> Everyone wants to be successful in their life and it might be getting wealth or honor.I watched a documentary about who can be a success and what is the speical feature of a success. >> I watched a documentary about who can be and the special features a successful person has.There are some tests for analysis. >>Correct! Analysts observed many ways such as morality, sociality, convergence and apriority. >>Correct! At that time that is very stange why is the morality important? >> At that time, it is very stange why is morality important?But now I have been known the morality is very important for success. >> But now I have known that morality is very important for success.I thought about how was my life and have I honestly lived? >> I thought about how was my life and if I have honestly lived?If there are many people around me , I will act the moral. >> If there are many people around me , I will act the moral way.  Opposite condition, conversely, I wasted some trashs because I didn't do conscious the people. >> In opposite condition, conversely, I wasted some trash because I didn't do it consciously to people.Thoese trivial actions can change me and influence of my life. >>Correct! (SPELLING: Those)I really want to be a more moral person and it is good for me. >>Correct! (ALSO: …person because it is good for me.)