success

When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.\" Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

In my opinion, we need also a good lunk to success. Sometime just hard work isn\'t enough to obtain what you want. 

>> in my opinion, we also need good luck to succeed. Sometimes, just hard work isn\'t enough to obtain what you want.
 Luck can be the relationship, timing etc. 

>> Luck can be the relationship between timing etc.
 For example, you prepared perfectly a presentation of new model for a several months.

>> For example, you perfectly prepared a presentation of new model for several months.

or

>> For example, you prepared perfectly on a presentation of new model for several months.

The day of presentation, you get sick and the every transportation gets in trouble and delayed.

>> On the day of the presentation, you get sick and every transportation gets in trouble and delayed.

Adding insult to injury, it rains cats and dogs so that your clothes seem terrible. 

>> Adding insult to injury, it rains cats and dogs so that your clothes look terrible. 
 Even in school and in team projet, meeting good collaborator can depend on luck. 

>> Even in school and in team projects, meeting good collaborator can depend on luck.
 We can\'t say luck is primodial (primordial) element for success but important for success

>> Correct