Successful career and happy family life.
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What is a successful career? What is a happy family life? I have a question?
Which do you like a money or honor? And Which do you like a reality or ideal? When I was at university, it was 35 years ago, I had talked with my friends on the theme of success. I remembered what I said at that time, I told to my friend "success means doing what I want to do regardless of social reputation and money". And then, Socially, success means to have a money and honor. In the process, however, he has no choice but to neglect his family. So, a successful career and a happy family life are incompatible. Well, the wife is the most important member of the family. Wife is a woman. A woman tend to like more money than social reputation. It's a reality. And then, what should the man choose? The man should the money for a happy family life. If money is compatible with social success, it is absolutely good. But the reality is not. In conclusion, God does not give man everything. I choose a happy family life.
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Hi there [이름]!
Well said! You can\'t have everything. You either choose one or the other. You might not become totally happy or satisfied so you better choose which you think will make you happier.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
What is a successful career? What is a happy family life? I have a question?
>> correct!
Which do you like a money or honor? And Which do you like a reality or ideal?
>> Which do you like better-- money or honor? And Which do you like reality or ideal?
When I was at university, it was 35 years ago, I had talked with my friends on the theme of success.
>> correct!
I remembered what I said at that time, I told to my friends, \"success means doing what I want to do regardless of social reputation and money\".
>> correct!
And then, Socially, success means to have money and honor. In the process, however, he has no choice but to neglect his family.
>> correct!
So, a successful career and a happy family life are incompatible. Well, the wife is the most important member of the family.
>> correct!
Wife is a woman.
>> correct!
A woman tend to like more money than social reputation.
>> A woman tends to like more money than social reputation.
It\'s a reality. And then, what should the man choose?
>> correct!
The man should the money for a happy family life. If money is compatible with social success, it is absolutely good.
>> The man should choose money for a happy family life. If money is compatible with social success, it is absolutely good.
But the reality is not. In conclusion, God does not give man everything. I choose a happy family life.
>> correct!
Well said! You can\'t have everything. You either choose one or the other. You might not become totally happy or satisfied so you better choose which you think will make you happier.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
What is a successful career? What is a happy family life? I have a question?
>> correct!
Which do you like a money or honor? And Which do you like a reality or ideal?
>> Which do you like better-- money or honor? And Which do you like reality or ideal?
When I was at university, it was 35 years ago, I had talked with my friends on the theme of success.
>> correct!
I remembered what I said at that time, I told to my friends, \"success means doing what I want to do regardless of social reputation and money\".
>> correct!
And then, Socially, success means to have money and honor. In the process, however, he has no choice but to neglect his family.
>> correct!
So, a successful career and a happy family life are incompatible. Well, the wife is the most important member of the family.
>> correct!
Wife is a woman.
>> correct!
A woman tend to like more money than social reputation.
>> A woman tends to like more money than social reputation.
It\'s a reality. And then, what should the man choose?
>> correct!
The man should the money for a happy family life. If money is compatible with social success, it is absolutely good.
>> The man should choose money for a happy family life. If money is compatible with social success, it is absolutely good.
But the reality is not. In conclusion, God does not give man everything. I choose a happy family life.
>> correct!
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