Suddenly being philosophical
학생이 쓴 원문
Though I can edit my memories, I won\'t erase anything. It\'s not because all of my memories are good but because I can learn even tiny things through my memories. (The reason why I think so is also based on one of my major subjects Bigdata analysis and honestly, I obsess over memories and documents.)For example, I have really bad memories of my ex-boyfriend but If I forget this, I\'ll repeat the same mistake which is dating another K-boys! It sounds horrible. hahaha
I went through difficulties because of the bad memories which make me uncomfortable and weak. However, If I overcome my inner pressure I can expand my limits. It takes time to face my bad memories but after that, It feels like I conquer an enemy which gnaw at me. Sometimes we frustrate because of the bad memories inside of our head. As long as we are the owner of those memories, we can handle it and develop it in a sound way. I believe in the innate resilience that every single person has.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for a beautifully-made composition. I find myself agreeing to all your ideas. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT! (Wow! Very wise words! )
The reason why I think so is also based on one of my major subjects Big data analysis and honestly, I obsess over memories and documents.
>>CORRECT!
For example, I have really bad memories of my ex-boyfriend but If I forget this, I\'ll repeat the same mistake which is dating another K-boys! It sounds horrible. hahaha
>>For example, I have really bad memories of my ex-boyfriend but If I forget these, I\'ll repeat the same mistakes which is dating other K-boys! It sounds horrible. hahaha
I went through difficulties because of the bad memories which make me uncomfortable and weak.
>>CORRECT!
However, If I overcome my inner pressure I can expand my limits.
>>CORRECT!
It takes time to face my bad memories but after that, It feels like I conquer an enemy which gnaw at me.
>>It takes time to face my bad memories but after that, it feels like I conquer an enemy which gnaw at me.
Sometimes we frustrate because of the bad memories inside of our head.
>>Sometimes, we get frustrated because of the bad memories inside our heads.
As long as we are the owner of those memories, we can handle it and develop it in a sound way.
>>CORRECT!
I believe in the innate resilience that every single person has.
>>CORRECT! (NOTE: These words are so beautiful!)
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