Suicide
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I don’t think suicide is a right way to die for the young people because they have still their future. Even though they are in a extreme bad situation, Still there could be hope. But as I get older, I sometimes think about “Death of Dignity” Because when I get old and can’t move well by myself but there’s no one who can take care of me. then \"Death of Dignity\" may be the best way to die I think.
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Hello [이름] Ki! Thank you so much for taking the time in writing your composition. I admire your honesty in expressing your thoughts on a given topic. I understand that this is a sensitive subject for some. We will talk more in class. I will see you then. Take care!~T. Lyn
I don’t think suicide is a right way to die for the young people because they have still their future.
>>I think suicide is not considered an appropriate way of dying especially for young people because they still have a future.
Even though they are in a extreme bad situation, Still there could be hope.
>>Even in the worst of circumstances, there can be hope.
But as I get older, I sometimes think about “Death of Dignity”
>>But as I get older, I sometimes have thought about \"Death with Dignity.\"
Because when I get old and can’t move well by myself but there’s no one who can take care of me.
>>As I get older, I can\'t move well on my own because there is no one to take care of me.
then \"Death of Dignity\" may be the best way to die I think.
>>\"Death with Dignity\" may be the best way to die in my opinion.
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