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These charts have all different percentages. Let\'s take a look at the chart of north America first.
Their industrial using is the most enormous rate of 48%.
>> CORRECT
The agricultural use of water is the secondly higher group.
>> The agricultural use of water is the second higher group.
The lowest one is domestic using.
>> CORRECT
In the same way, the chart of Europe is likely assemble with north America but their percentage is not exactly same.
>> In the same way, the chart of Europe is likely close with the North America but their percentage is not exactly same.
However, other groups except them have higher rates in an agricultural using.
>> However, other groups except them have higher rates in agricultural using.
In central Asia and south America, water is more used in a house than industry when Africa and east Asia use it more in commercial.
>> In Central Asia and South America, water is more consumed in houses than in industries while Africa and the East Asia use it more for commercial.
In research, remarkable results came form in the same country like America or Asia.
>> In research, remarkable results came from the same continents like America or Asia.
We can\'t find out why they are different but we know that how they use water in their country.
>> We can\'t find out why they are different but we know how they use water in their country.
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1.on
>> in
2.at
>> CORRECT
3.to
>> into
4.into
>> at
5.in
>> CORRECT
6.at
>> CORRECT
7.to
>> CORRECT
8.to
>> CORRECT
9.on
>> CORRECT
10.in
>> on
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