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2019-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 May

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In 2000, the largest part of this chart is the only English speaking group the rate of 30%. By the way, other groups are likely to be equal relatively. These groups are involved the part of French, German, Spanish, other language, and more than two other languages. I think British students more interested in Spanish because their percentage is higher than other groups. In 2010, the unit of no other language group is the smallest the rate of 10%. Others are more increased than first one. It\'s because internet of any international networks have advanced until now. In the same way, people who can speak more than two languages are more appeared when opposite parts are decreased. This result shows us how globalized the world is. //1.c 2.d 3.d 4.a 5.a 6.c 7.d 8.b

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~~Teacher May~~

In 2000, the largest part of this chart is the only English speaking group the rate of 30%.

>> In 2000, the largest group that took part on this chart is the English only group with the rate of 30%.

By the way, other groups are likely to be equal relatively.

>> CORRECT

These groups are involved the part of French, German, Spanish, other language, and more than two other languages.

>> These groups are French, German, Spanish, other language, and more than two other languages.
 I think British students more interested in Spanish because their percentage is higher than other groups.

>> I think that British students are more interested in Spanish because their percentage is higher than other groups, according to the chart.
 In 2010, the unit of no other language group is the smallest the rate of 10%.

>>  In 2010, the no other language group has the smallest rate of 10%.

Others are more increased than first one.

>> Others have increased more than the first one.

It\'s because internet of any international networks have advanced until now.

>> It\'s because internet, despite of any international networks, has been improving.

In the same way, people who can speak more than two languages are more appeared when opposite parts are decreased.

>> In the same way, people who can speak more than two languages are more recognized when opposite parts are decreased.
 This result shows us how globalized the world is. 

>> CORRECT
 //

1.c

>> a

2.d

>> a

3.d

>> c

4.a

>> c

5.a

>> CORRECT

6.c

>> a

7.d

>> CORRECT

8.b

>> c

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