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The percentage of this chart has between 0 to 60 and their age group divided 6.

>>The percentage shown on this chart is between 0 to 60 and the age group of men and women doing regular physical activity ins 2010 were divided into 6.

They started at 15 to over 65 and each unit involved approximately 10 years.

>>They started at 15 until over 65 and each unit involved approximately 10 years.

Let\'s take a look at the main graph.

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It shows that most female groups indicate higher rates than male groups.

>>CORRECT!
However, in 15 to 24, it is the only part which male group has higher score than female.

>>However, in  the age group 15 to 24, it is the only part which  the male group has higher score than  the female.

I think it because young man in school had more chances for joining or exercising together.

>>I think, it\'s because young men in school have more chances in joining or exercising together.

They have to get a job since after graduating so that they cannot glean themselves because of doing their work for living.

>>They have to get a job after graduating so that they cannot take care of themselves because of working for a living.
Otherwise female\'s physical activity have grown gradually.

>>Meanwhile, female\'s physical activity have grown gradually.

This because there are more resting or quitting women than men.

>>This because there are more women who are taking a rest from work or quitting than men.

It means that lots of women quit the job as older as they are even though some of them maintain their job.

>>It means that lots of women quit the job as they become older but some of them maintain their job.
In 65 and over, however, both tow groups are almost same as well.

>>In the age group 65 and over, however, both groups are almost the same.

I accessed my email per a hour because I have joined the group of studying IELTS.

>>I access my email every hour because I have recently joined a study group for IELTS.

They say lots of things so I checked it frequently

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>>OR: They share a lot of things that\'s why I log-in my email often.