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In this center, the main building is shops in each map.

>> The main buildings in each map are shops.

 Before development, the main road divided shops to two areas.

>> Before the development, the main road divided the shops into two areas.

There is a park in the eastern side of shops and the school is located in the western side.

>> CORRECT

Houses are in the middle between the park and the school.

>> Houses are located between the park and the school.

The map which is the before statement has no more facilities at all.

>> The first map shows that there are no facilities.
 However, after constructions, it feels more safety and very clear by appearing new roads and buildings.

>> However, after constructions, it feels more safe and became clearer due to construction of new roads and buildings.

The best change is the dual carriageway which around the town and it can also connect the park and school.

>> The best change is the dual carriageway which is around the town and it can also connect the park and the school.
 Furthermore, the road of pedestrians only are made in town.

>>  Furthermore, the pedestrian lane are only made in the town.

It would be very safety for children then parents have less concerned about them.

>> It would be very safe for children and parents wouldn\'t have much worries.
 There are many changes in it as well like a new bus station, a parking lot in the shopping center, and new houses instead of eliminating northern shops.

>> There are other changes as well like a new bus station, a car park in the shopping center, and new houses instead of eliminating a northern shops.
 Refurbishing the town make residents more happily and they can feel more comfortable.

>> Refurbishing the town makes residents feel happier and they can feel more comfortable.
 /I will go to the hair, make-up, and dress shop and also get a good car.

>> CORRECT