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~~Teacher May~~

In 2007, there was the one road to enter the hospital and this circumstances made many people uncomfortable because that was also used by public transportation.

>> In 2007, there was a one road to goes directly to the hospital and this circumstance made many people uncomfortable because that was also used as the main highway.
 It would be very difficult that emergency car came to the hospital.

>> It was very difficult for an ambulance car to come to the hospital.
 Besides, the parking lot was just one so that dicey situations would be often occurred by that although the parking fee was high.

>> Besides, there was only one parking lot that had a high fee and was the cause of a lot of dicey situations.
 However, after the refurbishiment, the one road is seperated two: for transportations and for cars.

>>  However, after the refurbishiment, that road was divided into two: for public transportations and for private cars.
 A new parking lot is made next to the hospital and this is for citizens. Staffs can park their car in the past place.

>> A new parking lot was made next to the hospital and this is for citizens. Staffs can also ark their car.
 The conspicuous change is roundabouts which are in northern and southern side and there is the hospital road between them.

>> The conspicuous change is the roundabouts which are in the northern and southern side and there is a road between them that goes to the hospital.

It would be more efficient getting in here or leaving as well.

>> It would be more efficient to commute as well.
 By constructing, patienta, staffs, and others ca be more comfortable for using any of these.

>> With the improvements, patients, staffs, and others can feel more comfortable by using any of these.

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I\'ll probably do as the leader orders me.

>> I\'ll probably do it when the leader orders me.

Volunterring has always a leader so that he or she managed all tasks for what to do or where to go.

>> Volunteering has always a leader that manages all tasks: what to do and where to go.