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Jung So-ra , a 19-year-old university student wins Miss. [Name] 2010. This competition was gosted by actor Kim Suro and former Miss. [Name] 2000 Kim sa-rang.
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Jung So-ra , a 19-year-old university student wins Miss. [Name] 2010. >>Jung So-ra , a 19-year-old university student won Miss. [Name] 2010. This competition was gosted by actor Kim Suro and former Miss. [Name] 2000 Kim sa-rang.
>>This competition was hosted by actor Kim Suro and former Miss. [Name] 2000 Kim sa-rang.
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